Heeeh, thanks! I've been there MANY TIMES, so I can't judge :P

I'm on a roll right now, which I know doesn't stay around long, so I'm pretty much riding the lightning while I have free time.

And I'm glad I got the tension across! I tend to write more introspective things or meandering plots, and it's mostly... Jyn talks to people and doesn't get killed, lol, but I did want some of her urgency there.