Dear Just Married Author

Jun. 16th, 2025 01:46 pm
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I use the same name everywhere so I am [personal profile] beatrice_otter on AO3. Treats are awesome.

I would rather get a story you were happy with than "well, she said she liked x, so I guess I have to do x even though I don't like x and/or am not inspired that way." This letter is long with lots of suggestions and preferences if you find it helpful, but feel free to ignore it if it is not helpful. I'm fairly easy to please; I've been doing ficathons for over a decade and am usually very happy with my gifts.

The most important thing for me in a fic is that the characters are well-written and recognizably themselves. Even when I don't like a character, I don't go in for character-bashing. If nothing else, if the rest of this letter is too much or my kinks don't fit yours, just concentrate on writing a story with everyone in character and good spelling and grammar and I will almost certainly love what you come up with.

I have an embarrassment squick, which makes humor kind of hit-or-miss sometimes. The kind of humor where someone does something embarrassing and the audience is laughing at them makes me uncomfortable. On the other hand, the kind of humor where the audience is laughing with the characters I really enjoy.


General Likes and DislikesHere are some other things to keep in mind:
  • I like stuff that takes side characters and puts them center-stage, especially when the characters and/or actors are marginalized. I enjoy seeing them come to life.
  • I don't like it when marginalized characters get relegated to the sidekick/supporting/helper role so that it can be All About The White Dude.
  • I like it when female characters are more than just the Strong Female Character(tm) or The Nurturer.
  • I like fluff
  • I like angst with a happy ending
  • I like stories that make me think about things in a new way.
  • I like to know that culture matters to people, and to see how different cultures interact and where the clashes are.
  • I like unreliable narrators.
  • I like acknowledgment that different people can have different points of view without either of them being wrong.
  • I like stories that engage with problematic aspects of the source, and which deal with privilege in one way or another instead of sweeping it under the rug.
  • Worldbuilding is my jam, I am pretty much always up for explorations of why the world is the way it is. I love hearing about the economics, the politics, the religion, the clothing, the history, the folklore, all of that kind of stuff. And I want to know why it matters--how is all this cultural background stuff affecting the characters, the plot, everything. You don't have to do deep worldbuilding, but I'll enjoy it if you do.
  • I don't like it when plots hinge on characters being selectively stupid, or selectively unable to communicate. Like, if they are stupid or a himbo or whatever in general, or have problems communicating in general, that's fine! Or if they canonically have a blind spot in that area, again, it's fine. But if it's just "the only way I can think of for this plot to work is if the character spontaneously and temporarily loses half their intelligence and competence," then I'm going to spend the rest of the fic wondering why the character didn't just ____?
  • I like AUs, but not complete setting AUs (i.e. no highschool or college or coffee shop AUs, and especially not mundane AUs--nothing where you keep characters but drop most of the worldbuilding). I like fork-in-the-road type AUs, where one thing is different and the changes all result from that one thing, and you explore what might have been if such-and-such happened.
  • I like the concept of sedoretu marriages.
  • I like historical AUs, but only when the author actually knows the history period in question and does thoughtful worldbuilding to meld actual culture of the time with the canon.
  • Crackfic is really hit and miss for me, sometimes I love it and sometimes I can't stand it. Basically, if it's the characters we know and love in a ludicrous situation, that's great. If they're OOC or parodied in order to make something funny ... it's not funny to me.
I like plotty, gen stories, and plotty stories in general. I don't care for explicit sex, particularly when it's just thrown in for teh porn. I'm asexual; a lot of the time I don't even bother to read the sex scenes. Romance is awesome (as long as both are in character and the romantic plot doesn't hinge on one or both of them being an idiot). I love it when friendship is held up as important and not secondary to romantic relationships and blood ties.

Please no incest or darkfic. I define "darkfic" as stuff where there's a lot of suffering and no hope even at the end and all the characters are terrible. Angst with a happy ending is fine, I enjoy it, but there's gotta be a payoff. Even an ambiguous ending is fine! But there has to be some note of grace or redemption or hope somewhere, it can't just be "people are awful and the world sucks, the end." I define incest as siblings and/or parents, cousins don't count.

I love outsider perspectives and academic takes on things. In-universe meta (newspaper articles, academic monographs--especially with the sort of snarky feuding common in actual real-world academia, social media feeds in current day or future worlds) is awesome.

Also, I'm picky about European historical clothing details. You don't have to talk about it at all! In fact, if you don't know much about historical clothing, I would prefer if you didn't mention it at all. My pet peeve is corsets: no, they weren't a restrictive tool of the patriarchy, no, they didn't interfere with most women's daily lives, no, most women weren't wearing them so tight they couldn't breathe.

I like religion but I'm picky about it. Basically, Christianity is deeply weird compared to most other religions, and a lot of people whose only experience with religion is living in a culturally-Christian nation assume that what they know about Christianity is some sort of universal principle of What Religion Is Like, and that's just not the case. For example, in Christianity what you believe is more important than what you do. This is not to say we Christians don't teach and practice Christian ethics or have rituals we are very attached to, but rather that if you don't believe in Jesus Christ, it doesn't matter what rituals you participate in or what ethical things you do, you are not a Christian (although you may be a "cultural Christian"). Every Christian group has at least a minimal core theology that members must affirm, but participation in ritual is far less rigidly a requirement. Most other religions rank what you do (both ethically and ritually) as more important than what you believe, and it is often quite possible to be a member in good standing if you participate in the practices and rituals even if you believe none of the teachings. Anyway, point is, if you are doing worldbuilding for a fantasy or SF or otherwise non-Christian religion ... unless it is explicitly a Christian-analogue, it should be different from Christianity. Question your assumptions and see where that leads you, and I will be fascinated and thrilled.


Marriage Tropes and the Just Married Exchange
There are so many tropes in the tag set, and so many of them are hyper-specific, and I really hate what that does to matching and also to requesting tropes. For example, there's no way to say "yeah, I love me some time travel, anything with time travel will be awesome." Unless you want to completely throw open the gates and request any (not just "any time travel" but "any trope in the tag set"), in which case you can't DNW things you don't want. It's really limiting to both requestor and author! So if you're writing for me, I hereby declare the tropes as more suggestions than as Things You Absolutely Must Include. If you feel inspired by a trope tag I did not request, you're fine as long as I did not DNW it. So, for example, if you want to write Wimsey fic, and you want to write Peter and Harriet getting divorced, that's fine, because I have not DNWed it. But you couldn't write a fic where they're in Starfleet and Harriet is a Betazoid, because I have DNWed setting change AUs.


Peter Wimsey
I love all these characters and desperately crave more Wimseyverse. If you want to do a casefic of some sort, that would be delightful; a casefic centering on Parker or Bunter as the main detective with Peter in a supporting role would be lovely. But I would also be absolutely thrilled with domestic fluff or relationship issues or just the characters sitting down to tea and chatting. (Especially if you can capture Peter's piffling style or the layering of literary references in his and Harriet's speech.)

Harriet/Peter: I love their canon arc, of him falling so deeply in love immediately but her being so deeply hurt by what she's going through--and then by the baggage of being grateful to him and all the baggage of being a professional woman in that era and having to work through that as she falls in love back before she can say yes to him. I would adore anything canon-compliant set anywhere along that trajectory, or things set after they're married--during the war, maybe. However, I would also love AUs! What if they met earlier in some different way? Maybe they were both at one of Marjorie's parties. Maybe he happened to visit Oxford while recovering from the War and met Harriet there. (She was born around 1900, so she would probably have been starting 1918-1919.)

Bunter/Peter/Harriet: There are so many interesting angles you could take this! However, please DON'T go for "Peter/Bunter are established, but Peter offers to dump Bunter for Harriet" or "Peter/Bunter are established, and nothing changes in Peter's courtship of Harriet." Peter and Bunter's relationship is so fraught in canon--they play-act at the normal master-servant relationships, but Bunter's care for Peter goes far beyond that, and Peter jokes about Bunter being his wife in a way that I read as a bit "don't look too closely because in some ways it's true, but we can only acknowledge it through mockery." If you add sex to that, you get something that is even closer to marriage than their canon relationship. Peter can drop his mistresses immediately because the relationship is not based on anything deeper than sex and entertaining companionship. Bunter is in a different category altogether. I would love to see how Peter falling in love with Harriet changes things, if he and Bunter were together already. Regardless of Peter having love-at-first-sight with Harriet, I don't think he'd propose in this case without first at least talking with Bunter, which means no jail proposal. Maybe Peter (or Bunter!) sounds out Eiluned and Sylvia to figure out if it's safe to tell Harriet everything? Maybe there's a lot of angst on Bunter's part about being replaced--or maybe this time Harriet doesn't want to marry him because she doesn't think it's fair that she gets the public acknowledgement as Peter's spouse when really, it should be Bunter? Or maybe it's Peter who is angsting over the whole thing and Harriet and Bunter being very pragmatic about figuring out a workable solution. I'd love either a V with Peter in the center or a triad where all three are together with all three. Or maybe Peter and Bunter aren't together before Peter and Harriet marry (deeply in love but can't acknowledge it because of both issues with homosexuality and class), and it's Harriet--who has lived among the bohemian set--who gets the ball rolling. Or, as with Peter/Harriet, you could do an AU where they all met earlier ... and then the issue of his two years "dead" on that case become even more interesting.

Peter/Harriet/Mary/Parker: this is a sedoretu quartet for me, so Peter and Mary share a moiety and are NOT fucking. The pairings would be Peter/Harriet, Peter/Charles, Charles/Mary, Mary/Harriet. Please don't infantilize Mary, as Sayers and the fandom often do; she's only 5 years younger than Peter and was 28 in Clouds of Witness, 35 when she and Charles get engaged (during Strong Poison, in which Harriet is about 30). I think Mary should keep her revolutionary politics, even after marrying the staid middle-class policeman that is Charles Parker. I think this would make the dynamics of Strong Poison--and the Peter/Harriet courtship over the next several years--fascinating. It would add so many layers. Charles facing up to the possibility of sharing a household/sedoretu with a woman he investigated for murder! Harriet getting to know Mary, and not everything being about her issues with Peter!

Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic




DS9
I love alien culture worldbuilding, boldly going, exploring, wacky science hijinks, time travel, AU shenanigans. I love the hope that we can become better than we are. I love cross-cultural romance (especially when it deals realistically with having to figure out compromises--love is not all you need, you also need a lot of hard work and communication).

As for plot ... it's Star Trek. If you want to play it serious, go for it. If you want to lean into wacky tropes, that's great too. As long as everyone is in character, feel free to go as cracktastic as you want. One of my favorite things about DS9, it dealt with consequences. If you want to take a canon event that you think didn't get enough exploration and run with it, that would be awesome.

Do not feel bound by the trope tags. You can write anything as long as you respect my DNWs. (See note in the General section of the letter.)

I'd love something that dove into Bajoran religion, and the more ALIEN it is the better. We've MET the prophet and they have such a fundamentally different perspective on EVERYTHING than us linear creatures, I don't want it to feel like another screed on What Is Wrong With Christianity In America. You could lean into the Prophets' timey-wimey non-linearity and what that means for a religion that worships them. Most Earth religions are heavily time-based, with regular repeating festivals that serve a lot of purposes both social and religious--how would that work (or not work) when worshiping beings who see everything happening at once? Or explore the Orbs! What other orbs are there besides Time and Prophecy, and what do they DO? You don't have to have any ritual or belief or ANYTHING to use them, if they have line-of-sight to you they can DO THINGS. Give you visions! Send you time traveling! Whatever it is the others do! No Earth religion has any artifact that is anything like that, and besides wondering what the other orbs even are/do, I'm curious as to how they shaped Bajoran religion, and how it was that the Bajorans ended up worshiping the ones who SENT the orbs instead of the orbs themselves. Especially given that the Prophets mostly ... don't seem to want to be gods or care about being worshiped or what's going on on Bajor or anything. So it's not like they were sending messages with the Orbs about who sent them and why, which leaves a lot of scope for interpretation on the part of the Bajorans who found them.

I love Dax's relationship with Sisko, that lasted three hosts. What about when Sisko and Jadzia were still getting to know each other? They went from one power dynamic (Ambassador with lots of political power mentors callow youth) to a very different one (Sisko is all grown up, and Dax's superior officer, and with more life experience than Dax's current host). Negotiating that change must have been interesting, particularly if you throw in marriage to one of the hosts.

I thought that Kira and the O'Briens had a lot of chemistry, but also they have such radically different backgrounds and expectations. Culture, religion, childhood trauma--all radically different. I'd like to see how they could make it work.


I love to hate Dukat. You can use him as a villain, but don't ever forget that he's a manipulative weasel who most often actively chooses to do the worst thing possible. Even if he's doing something good in the moment, the moment is temporary.

Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic




SWOT
My favorite parts of Star Wars includes the PT, the OT, the Zahn trilogy (especially Mara Jade) and the X-Wing books, bits and pieces from the TV shows, Rey&Finn&Poe as the only contributions from the ST, and an ending where something new and better results after all the pain and trauma. (Or at least something different.) It's not that everything has to be perfect, but I want there to be at least some growth and change. If you are inspired by other corners of the Star Wars universe, feel free to bring them in, but those are my happy places, and I am perfectly fine with completely ignoring the ST or rewriting it to make it either less stupid or less depressing (or both).

I love Lando, and I think he was absolutely right to put the safety of his entire city and everyone living in it ahead of the well-being of a couple of old friends. He is smart, pragmatic, and responsible in the best possible way. Do Leia and Lando work together on political negotiations/shenanigans while Han plays house-husband and swoops in with the Falcon when they need backup? Do Han and Lando go off and make shady business deals and come home to Leia with intelligence she can use politically? Does Lando start up a new operation--maybe mining, maybe something else--or take over an existing one after the war is over, and become a respectable businessman? I was one of the contributors to the "What if Han became Emperor by accident" thread on tumblr a while back, and my contribution was "ooh, Lando would be his Grand Vizier!" and if you want to go that direction that would also be awesome. Also, Weird Jedi Shit is always fun. I didn't include many time travel/dimension travel/soul bond/SF tropes, feel free to use one of them instead of the tropes I picked.

Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic, Kylo Ren




SW Legends
The original Zahn trilogy and the X-Wing books are my favorite parts of the old Legends universe, but I like everything EXCEPT the Courtship of Princess Leia and the New Jedi Order stuff. (Teneniel Djo is awesome! Han kidnapping Leia is really really REALLY not. And I hated pretty much everything about the Vong.) I really like it when Luke is building a new Jedi community and rebuilding old traditions. You can bring in details from the PT and newer canon, if they don't contradict major parts of the Zahn trilogy.

Mara has such a complex past. I think she has trauma from her time with Palpatine that she can't admit even to herself--he was so good at grooming young people, so very manipulative, and even when you know your abuser did evil things to you, it's still hard to internalize. I think she has a unique perspective on the Force, and the Jedi, and galactic politics, that doesn't fit easily or neatly with the others but nevertheless is important to include if they don't want to re-make the mistakes of the past. It's about how do we remember the past while working to create a new future? How do we avoid making old mistakes? How do we heal? How do we build something better?

I love Lando, and I think he was absolutely right to put the safety of his entire city and everyone living in it ahead of the well-being of a couple of old friends. He is smart, pragmatic, and responsible in the best possible way. Do Leia and Lando work together on political negotiations/shenanigans while Han plays house-husband and swoops in with the Falcon when they need backup? Do Han and Lando go off and make shady business deals and come home to Leia with intelligence she can use politically? Does Lando serve as the practical "let's get support and resources for this new Jedi Order you're building" while Luke swans around being compassionate and heroic and saving the day? (But make sure that Lando's contributions are valued and not taken for granted.) I was one of the contributors to the "What if Han became Emperor by accident" thread on tumblr a while back, and my contribution was "ooh, Lando would be his Grand Vizier!" and if you want to go that direction that would also be awesome. Also, Weird Jedi Shit is always fun.

I think Lando and Mara would do very well together; both okay with shady stuff, but both with deep principles they will not compromise. My primary ship is Luke/Mara but I was livid when they retconned Lando/Mara out with "oh, no, they were never really together, it was just an undercover thing!" Even as a very sheltered middle class white teen, I could tell that was racist bullshit, and also smacked of that patriarchal extreme-monagamist trope where "if you love each other, your previous relationships can't have meant anything!" which always hits harder for women than men. No. People can decide a relationship isn't working and end it and start new ones without devaluing and denying the previous relationship. I would love Lando/Mara. I would love Luke/Mara where either she was never with Lando at all even for undercover purposes, or where Lando/Mara used to be together and broke up amicably. I would love Luke/Lando/Mara. I would be livid at "but Lando/Mara was never a real relationship!"

Plot bunnies: Standard Star Wars shenanigans where the fate of the galaxy is at stake and Our Heroes save the day. Is there critical knowledge in a hidden holocron they have to find? Is one of the other Hands (or an Inquisitor, or some other evil Force user) making trouble for Karrde and/or the New Jedi Order and/or the New Republic? Is the Empire threatening Lando's newest business venture (again)? Is there some situation where Lando's skills as a Respectable Businessman And Administrator are crucial to saving the day?

Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic, twincest, the "Lando and Mara were never really together, it was all a con/undercover thing!" retcon, Kylo Ren




BSG
I tend to prefer stories that go AU sometime in season 4, and where they DON'T choose to give up technology on the new Earth. However, there's also interesting things to be done with canon as is. I like Kara fine, but as the show progressed I got annoyed with the narrative focus on her and her Sooper Special Sekrit Destiny at the expense of other characters AND everything about her that wasn't related to that Special Destiny.

Lee/Dee/Kara/Sam is the obvious solution to the whole Lee/Kara drama, and yet it would cause almost as many problems as it would solve. I think Sam and Lee would get along ok, but Dee and Kara are like oil and water, and a poly relationship requires more communication, not less, and Kara sucks at communication. And they're all traumatized, but Kara especially acts out her trauma in really unhelpful ways. So! What would it do to their time on New Caprica? Were they split up as they were in canon? Were Kara and Sam on Pegasus, or Lee and Dee on New Caprica? What happens when Sam finds out he's a Cylon? What about Kara's mystical visions? (I always headcanoned that Kara's musician father that she had visions of was actually that one Cylon that the Ones got rid of completely, which would make her a hybrid like Hera.) Does having more people to help dealing with plot and emotional crises help, or does it just make things more difficult? If Dee doesn't die, does Felix still try for a coup?

If those ideas don't inspire you, here are some ideas I've had floating in the back of my head for two decades, mix and match as you like or feel free to ignore and do your own thing.

Plot bunnies: So, the show occasionally made nods to the supply problems, and I would be interested in something either dealing with the shortages or figuring out creative substitutions. I would be interested in stuff really exploring what it's like to be a Cylon and realizing the depth of how wrong they had been and what evil they had committed. I'd be interested in political wrangling and stuff dealing with religion (although please keep Baltar and Zarek to a minimum, and if you're going for the religion angle please don't go for "religion is bad and all believers are fundamentalists" angle). I'd be interested in day-in-the-life relationship stuff.

What if Kara's father was Daniel, the Cylon model the Ones got rid of when they got rid of the Five? What if the reason Cylons can't have babies is because the Ones douse the water supply with contraceptives? (They hate having biological bodies, betcha they hate the whole idea of children and reproducing that way.) What if Caprica Six hadn't miscarried? What if the jump at the end of the series, instead of going to a prehistoric Earth, took the fleet (and the Rebel Cylons) to the Twelve Colonies a couple of months before the Cylon attack? What if the kid Leoben dug up and claimed was his and Kara's actually WAS his and Kara's?

Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic, Dee committing suicide




Enterprise
What can I say, I just love Vulcans. Trip and T'Pol were hands down my favorite thing about the show. Also, I love the idea of that Enterprise that got thrown back in time and turned into a generation ship, and I would love to see more of them and what happened when they first got thrown back in time, and also what might have happened if Lorian's Enterprise had survived.

This is the couple that had not one but TWO kids neither knew about show up, Lorian and Elizabeth. What if either had lived? What if there was some OTHER shenanigans and they had a THIRD kid pop up, either through a normal pregnancy or some other SFnal shenanigans?

A note on worldbuilding: so much of the things we're told about Vulcans in Enterprise makes NO SENSE when compared with ... anything in any other Star Trek show ever. For example, how do you outlaw melds and telepathic contact when YOU NEED TELEPATHIC BONDS TO MATE EVERY SEVEN YEARS?!?!?!?!? You can either ignore the contradictions or lean into them and find explanations for them.

As for plot ... it's Star Trek. If you want to play it serious, go for it. If you want to lean into the wacky tropes Star Trek was known for, that's great too. As long as everyone is in character, feel free to go as cracktastic as you want with the time travel and travel to alternate universes and weird missions.

I love alien culture worldbuilding. I love boldly going and exploring and wacky science hijinks and time travel and alternate universe shenanigans. I love the hopeful attitude that we can become better than we are (but it might take a lot of work). I love cross-cultural romance (especially when it deals realistically with having to figure out what compromises each is going to make on what they expect out of a relationship--love is not all you need, you also need a lot of hard work and communication).

Prompts: what was life like when Enterprise was stuck back in time just waiting for things to come around so they could attack the Xindi weapon, knowing that Lorian was going to be the only one of them still alive when it happened? Pon Farr and its ramifications: if T'Pol has to go through Pon Farr with Trip how does that affect her relationship with them, both working and personal? IWhat about T'Pol's relationships with her family and friends back on Vulcan? What about T'Pol's neurological damage, how does that affect things? Or just a normal episode-like shenanigans!

Please ignore the last episode.

Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic, episode: "These are the Voyages ..."




TNG
I love alien culture worldbuilding, boldly going, exploring, wacky science hijinks, time travel, AU shenanigans. I love the hopeful attitude that we can become better than we are. I love cross-cultural romance (especially when it deals realistically with having to figure out what compromises each is going to make on what they expect out of a relationship--love is not all you need, you also need a lot of hard work and communication).

As for plot ... it's Star Trek. If you want to play it serious, go for it. If you want to lean into wacky tropes, that's great too. As long as everyone is in character, feel free to go as cracktastic as you want with the time travel and travel to alternate universes and weird missions.

Guinan is awesome, but please tone down the Magical Negro stereotype--she's not just The Wise Magic Advisor. She's got her own prejudices and traumas. I would love anything that dove into her past or her culture. Picard and Guinan have INCREDIBLE chemistry. Watch Time's Arrow and see the way he LOOKS AT HER. Something with time travel and meeting in the wrong order a la Time's Arrow would be interesting, but so would them hanging out together and being friends. Or an adventure from before they were together on Enterprise. Or an AU where Picard doesn't get back to the present in Time's Arrow because he stays with her, and then they have adventures trying to find a way to send him forward in time. I don't like most of the Picard TV show, but I do appreciate Picard and Guinan's stuff.

Riker/Ro: the episode where they have amnesia is amazing, I love stories that deal with what happened afterwards. Before that, they have such great conflict, because Riker is trying to manage Ro and not connecting with her, and Ro has Problems With Authority (unless she independently has come to respect the individual, as with Picard). Then they have amnesia and sleep together! And then they try to pretend it never happened.

Geordi was great. Professional in the face of all the wackiness Star Trek could throw at him, very smart, very compassionate. Aside from that one episode with the genetically engineered society, they didn't do much with his blindness besides "disabilities give you superpowers" with his visor. What are the downsides to it? What, if any, tradeoffs did he have to make, and was it his choice or something his parents decided for him? Does he ever get grief from fellow officers about "what happens if your visor gets knocked off, you'll be blind!" as if not being able to see would make him incompetent? He and Data have that wonderful friendship that is rock solid that I love to see explored and transmuted into romance.

Deanna Troi/Worf: This is three different cultures, and 'human' is the place in the middle that they both understand, but I'd be interested in something that explored the 'alien' cultures and didn't assume 'human' as normal. Klingon gender roles are that the women are loud and violent and the men read love poetry. Deanna's more the poetry type than the loud and violent type, and I'm not sure how much of a soft side Worf has. So neither of them quite 'fit' Klingon gender/sexual norms. Feel free to bring in the perspective Martok and the others had on mental illness when they were trapped in that Dominion prison camp, that mental illness is an enemy to fight and it takes a lot of strength to fight an enemy in your own head. From that perspective, Deanna is a weapons trainer for the mind.

Picard & Ro: I love the friendship and mentorship they have despite (or maybe because of) their differences, and the mutual trust they built. I'd be interested in an episode-type story set before she defected to the Maquis, or an AU where she didn't for some reason, or something after the Dominion War when she's no longer a terrorist. Or a role-reversal AU where Bajor is the perfect paradise world that's the founder of the Federation and provides most of the people for Starfleet, and Earth is the one conquered by the Cardassians. I absolutely LOVE Ro Laren, she's such a contrast to the rest of them.

Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic





Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic





Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic





Treats welcome
DNW: bashing, incest, explicit sex, rape/noncon, major embarrassment/humiliation, setting change AUs, human/no powers AUs, darkfic

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Jun. 12th, 2025 05:14 pm
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The River Has Roots, by Amal El-Mohtar, is very beautifully written and really is a love letter to fairy tales and sisterhood, all of which I knew it would be going into it. It is also a novella I am turning over in my head because I am trying to figure out if my "I think it should've been longer" is a genuine structural thing or just the side-effect of the print volume being ~130 pages long, only 99 of which are the titular story. (the other 30 pages are a short story teasing her upcoming short story collection.)

This is not a long story! Reading a doorstopper novel, something like Priory of the Orange Tree or Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norell (neither of which I ever finished, hah), being off in your estimations of length by 30 pages is unlikely to matter to the overall pacing of the book or what you expect from it.

It is almost a quarter of these printed pages.

That is a very significant amount of difference! I think about structure and pacing as I read. It's not always conscious, but I know that the number of pages remaining matters to me and my expectations. Sure, there's often some number of pages that aren't narrative at the end of a novel, but: scale, again, and also the sort of book that has extensive end notes/an appendix/etc is visible from the start, where it probably has a map and/or dramatis personae as well.

All of this is to say: I liked this story quite a lot! Which is why I'm spending so many words squinting at the way it was presented and poking at it like "you could've done better to prepare me for how this story was going to pace so that I wasn't surprised when it ended". (Because it is a gorgeous volume, with beautiful illustrations and clear care given to how it appears as an object, so why—)


2.
I taught kids class for aikido last night, because my friend who usually lead teaches wasn't feeling well, and used this as an excuse to teach the kids a very basic forward roll technique. They're all good enough at forward rolls to take one, and this throw done at their level just guides them into the position to take a forward roll; there's no force behind it, just form. (If done with the right timing and angle, it is very effective at forcing a roll! But that's much more advanced and very hard to do unintentionally.)

They did great with it, as I knew they would, and idk why this is the first time they've been taught a forward roll technique other than "my friend didn't want to teach it yet".

Next on my agenda: making them do the ikkyo pin. We'll see how long it takes to get there. (This is more likely to be something I can be like "hey what if we taught this" about and get "oh, yeah, sure" in response.)


3.
I talked to my mom on the phone this weekend. [insert 1k of deleted words about family stuff here, which tbh boil down to: I really should figure out finding and seeing a therapist. (this is not a new thought.)]


4.
I've started watching The Apothecary Diaries, an anime that I have been "yeah I'd probably like this" about since I first heard of it, and: surprise! I do like it quite a lot, as I like most stories about women and their politics and also weird girls with specialized knowledge using that knowledge to solve mysteries and help people. Maomao, the protag, is a 17yo apothecary who loves poison, does not notice people flirting with her, and thinks about how pretty the women surrounding her are all the time. (Also there's a dude who's in love with her in part because she's the only woman who goes "ew, leave me alone" instead of mooning over him, because heterosexuality must be gestured at and dudes need representation too.) (There are other men in the show; that guy, who also has interesting plot reasons for existing and doesn't actually exist solely to moon over Maomao, is just the only one other than Maomao's dad/teacher who really matters.)

I'm 10eps in and having fun. Truly just one of those things where sometimes everyone going OMG IT'S SO GOOD makes it hard to give stuff a shot, and going "y'know what I want to try something new and this has always sounded fun" is a lot easier to make happen.


5.
In other thoughts about tv shows and structure/pacing. So. Okay. I have a terrible fondness for Hearing About Sports while also often having zero interest in watching sports. (Sometimes [personal profile] tavina liveblogs sports at me and I adore this, it's very fun, please tell me about your investment in an event and explain to me why you have feelings about it; I love to go !!! over things I only just heard about and learn about underdogs I will promptly root for on principle. or about Your Team doing well at things when I have no investment about rooting for anyone in particular but like it when my friends' investment is rewarded!)

So there's the netflix sports shows, which I'm pretty sure started with Drive to Survive, which is about F1. There are a number of seasons. My twin got me to start watching them like. Three years ago...? Something like that. It's a good series, and that's in large part because in its first season it understood a very important fact about sports tv:

You need to give the audience enough context about the sport that they know why they should be invested in it.

It's not enough to present a charismatic and/or attractive person who wants to win (and probably won't) and say "look! root for this person!". You gotta know what the sport is, and what makes it dramatic, and what it takes for someone to be good at it, and then you need to show the people you're following being good at that sport! It's okay if they fail, or fuck up, or whatever not being perfect looks like; you just also gotta show when they do things right, when they get close to victory, when they have the stuff that makes it interesting to root for them. And that means the audience needs to know what that is, and what it looks like, and see that happening.

A startling number of mediocre Netflix sports reality shows do not understand that the first thing I want from a sports reality show is: the sport

perhaps I am unusual for this, but, like

if you want to get people into your sport... I think they need to be given the tools to understand the basics of how your sport works... and see that sport being performed/played in competition...

also your show can't just be "look! women can do this too!" and generally spend more times on the lives of the women than on the women actually doing the thing. like, yes, I know people find that inspiring, but wow it's more inspiring to see people doing thing than to see them crying with their families about having fucked up, couldn't you have used that time to show some people doing cool stuff instead. show me their training. their actions. not their failures to the point where I'm like... where even was the cool victory stuff... you were too focused on humanizing them and forgot that being visibly good at shit is part of the story of "I want to be one of the best in the world at this activity" too...
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The rec for this book described it as divided into four sections for four women POV characters--a soldier, a scholar, a poet, and a socialite--and their perspectives on a war/rebellion, with effective worldbuilding, beautiful prose, and increasing intensity as each POV gives different perspectives on the same events. Okay, sold!

This is set in the same universe as Samatar's "A Stranger in Olondria." I have not read that one. It's possible I might have gotten more out of this if I had, however, there are plenty of reviews saying this one works as a standalone, so I'm reviewing it as a standalone.

Premise: Olondria is an on-again, off-again empire, built from three closely-related peoples--the Laths, Nain, and Kestenya. The Laths consider themselves favored of the gods (unfortunately, one of the side effects of divine intervention is creepy vampires), and try to conquer/ally with the other two. Their default line of succession is from the king to his sister's son, and only to the king's son if he has no nephews of his own, which allows for neat political dynamics (Arthuriana vibes, nice!) The feredhai are nomadic people from Kestenya, who resent the concept of land ownership and other border controls imposed by authorities with written rules. A couple generations ago, one of the rebellious Kestenya leaders grew too horrified at the Laths' slaughter of civilians, and betrayed his allies to seek a peaceful resolution to the war. In return, he was granted the Lath princess' hand in marriage, and the new royal family is a blend of Laths, Kestenya, and Nain families, with a pair of sisters marrying a pair of brothers to create a double cousin dynamic. Meanwhile, a new ascetic religious movement, the "Cult of the Stone," has emerged and gained influence among the ruling elite; the devotees try to translate inscriptions off an ancient stone, and put them together to build a scripture focused around the value of reading and writing while avoiding sensual pleasures or wealth, while ignoring any texts that don't seem to fit the austere tone.

Prince Dasya is the heir to the throne; Siski and Tavis (aka Tav) are his cousins. Tav dresses up in boys' clothes to join the army and fight against the Brogyars, but becomes disillusioned with war and empire, and later falls in love with Seren, a feredhai poet. Tav and Dasya plot to start a revolution to bring down the Olondrian empire and the Cult of the Stone and win independence for Kestenya. Results are mixed.

What I just summarized is much more straightforward and linear than the way the book is actually presented. Each section is highly nonlinear in a kind of free association way: one character smells or sees or hears something that evokes of her past, and it abruptly jumps around between timeframes. There's a lot of descriptive prose, but to me, it felt more like "throwing a lot of words at the wall and seeing what sticks." Sentence fragments. Like this. No verbs. Or run-on sentences that talk about this war and then the war two generations ago and then the war described by In-Universe Scholar in her epic poem, "War Is Hell," and then a vague reminder there are vampires but that's probably not very important. I like in-universe documentation when it's done well, but here it didn't feel like it was adding much, just a vibe-based barrage of names.

I'm semi-randomly going to quote a representative example from each of the four sections:

Already it was spreading into the highlands: rumors reached us of a carriage waylaid on the road to Bron, two Olondrians slain, tiny bells found in their mouths. Bells, for prayer. I wondered how Fadhian had received the news—if he, so cautious, was ready to hear the words Kestenya Rukebnar. Delicious motto of the traitorous dead. Sometimes I could not sleep, thinking of how I would say those words to him. Kestenya Rukebnar. In their silver resonance I would be revealed: not merely an eccentric noblewoman amusing herself with highland games, but a link between rebellious Kestenya, the rebellious Valley, and the rebellious north—a key, a chance, a bell, a sword.

When Ivrom was small he dreamt of gorging himself, as rich children do, on pigs made of almond paste. One year on the Feast of Birds he stole a handful of nuts from a vendor’s cart and was beaten and locked in the coal cellar for two days. The sweetness of cashews, their unctuous buttery flesh, the way they collapsed between the teeth as if in longing to be eaten, combined in his mind with the darkness and cold of the cellar and the struggle he waged with his body before he gave in and relieved himself in a corner. The shame of it, the stinging scent of the lye his father made him use to scrub out the cellar afterward, his terrible helplessness, his rage—all of these insinuated themselves into the atmosphere of the Feast of Birds: into sweetmeats, the worship of Avalei, and the spring.

Let’s say and let’s get it out that your grandfather was Uskar of Tevlas who signed the shameful treaty that ended the last, unsuccessful war for independence, that he was a pawn and a dupe and also a traitor who knew very well what he did and a mystic in thrall to a man with ribs like gullies in a drought. Your grandfather prayed with the great Olondrian visionary who made your grandfather sleep on planks that brought out sores on his soft and timid body, and my grandfather slept in a mass grave on the road to Viraloi where he was hung by the heels with seventeen others until they died of thirst. Let’s say that. Let’s write it.

Home. The hook where she hangs her cloak, the threadbare rug in the hall. Light from an inner room, translated light. It is the glow of the library fire reflected in a mirror and flung out here, to this hall with the flaking walls. Walking past, she drags her fingernail along the plaster and a white chip drops. A little bit each day.

Tav says that she's not really good with words, she's just a soldier, but I personally found all of the sections to be more concerned with trying to convey a sense of "poetic" prose than giving distinct character voices.

The closest "comparison" book I would think of for this one is Tigana, by Guy Gavriel Kay, which has vivid prose and also deals with the pros and cons of trying to overthrow an empire in the name of older nations, outsider POVs on the prince who's trying to take back his homeland, and evocative descriptions of in-universe religion and lore. Tigana, however, has more of a sense of humor, and the prose--while rich--is more straightforward both on a sentence level and overall chronological level.

(On the other hand, "Tigana" also has a creepy but pointless sibling incest plot; "Winged Histories" has a complicated cousin incest plot that actually goes somewhere. So advantage to "Winged Histories" on this specific comparison.)

In describing feredhai music, Seren notes that "You will have noticed that all the great songs are sad." Nobody in this book spends a lot of time being happy, and while I understand that war is hell, when it's just unrelenting misery it makes it difficult to care! Tav's sympathetic backstory is "my terrible aunt threw my book of women soldiers in the fire." Tialon makes up a trauma-porn backstory for her father, then admits it's a total fabrication because he never told her anything about himself. Seren loves Tav...except that her people are warriors who die while Tav's people are spoiled sellouts, because empire is terrible and destroys everything it touches. Maybe we're supposed to believe they can change the narrative, but I'm not confident! And Siski has nothing else to live for, so she might as well die with her cousin, except maybe she's not actually going to die, maybe it's a new beginning. Maybe. Imagine. Perhaps. Ambiguity. All vibes. The loose ends that "Tigana" left unresolved were frustrating; "Winged Histories"' weren't, because I didn't really care in the first place.

Bingo: Hidden Gem, Down with the System, Book In Parts, was a previous Readalong, Author of Color, Small Press, LGBTQIA protagonist.
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Masterlist

I feel kinda bad about how badly I'm butchering LeGuin's flowing prose for these posts. But I learn by summarising and sometimes even a clunky summary is easier on the brain. And maybe I'll inspire some of youse to go read the original!
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Steering the craft by Ursula K LeGuin is "A revised and updated guide to the essentials of a writer’s craft", and includes writing exercises in each chapter.
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Jun. 8th, 2025 07:41 am
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To nobody's surprise, I once again had the best grades in my apprentice cohort. (More entertaining: first/second/third for my year was the exact same people in the exact same order, and the other two were fighting over second place because they figured I'd get first again.) Apparently this means I'll get to go to the regional competition again next year, since the way that's structured is "the people who do best each year get to go and we figure out what category each of you is in along the way (and also the one TAB guy goes)". We'll see! (This means two of us will need to do something we don't do for work. Curious to see if the guy who did architectural last year will do it again this year. Very curious who gets asked to do welding.) It'll be in Boston next year, so that's an easy drive, something to look forward to.

The last day of school, where they announce this, is also a potluck provided by the instructional staff. There was. Functionally nothing I could eat, between "cannot eat cheese/dairy" and "does not eat pork/beef". I know why I expect better in general even if my reaction is weary disappointment and "yeah, of course". (I have explained these food restrictions multiple times and nobody thinks about them anyway.) (they are not hard to avoid)

Work is work. It continues. It's very funny any day that everyone's just sort of like... "we are doing obnoxious things that are not hard but are time-consuming and make us wonder what the people who told us to do this were thinking, and also it is hot, how much time can we spend talking instead".

Obligate Diurnalism continues to rear its head as we approach the solstice. Probably I am not getting as much sleep as I should most nights! Oh well. I am getting enough sleep, overall, and my body will force me to bed earlier if I actually need it.

in non-irl things:

Murderbot show continues to be good! Very fun to watch! Has some divergences from the book, in large part because of being a different medium I suspect, but that's not making it any less fun to watch. Everyone's facial expressions are fantastic. The in-universe media is a joy. They made a theme song for Sanctuary Moon and it's so cheesy and good.

I have been spending a truly impressive amount of time talking to [personal profile] hafnia about a specific AU for our D&D blorbos (which started out as iddy kink nonsense but then GREW PLOT), which is so canon-divergent we're just like "this is basically original work with D&D filling in the worldbuilding that's not important". It is such a joy to wake up in the morning to see more of it turned into prose and be like "oooh YES :eyes:" and have feelings about things that I already knew were going to happen because we've talked out like the vast majority of what's going to happen. xD But it's DIFFERENT when it's in narrative prose instead of flowing between rp and brainstorming, y'know?

However also I need to write more things that are not about the D&D campaign that is my primary fandom brain thing right now, due to having exchanges etc that uh I did agree to do and do care a lot about but also I did most of those sign ups before (*checks*) the beginning of the month (50k later and we are at "gotta clear up the curse before we can get to the really iddy kink nonsense, but that shouldn't take too much longer!"). So. Can't plan for "I have been CONSUMED"?

...it's fine I can write enough words in the time available, I just need to drag myself away from going "HEY SO WHAT IF" or "OH NO: A THOUGHT" all the time. xD

(I am having SUCH a good time with this though <3)

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Jun. 4th, 2025 11:45 am
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[community profile] justmarried exchange is currently in the nomination phase, and I have been having trouble because they allow you to sign up with ten fandoms but you only can nominate seven. And my favorite marriage trope is the sedoretu, which is a specific type of poly marriage invented by Ursula K. LeGuin, and requires four people. Which means that I need to have foursomes nominated! (Although I can just go with a pairing and say "I love sedoretus, if you want to write this pairing as a sedoretu you can choose who to have be the other pair in the sedoretu.")

Anyway, the reason I have not nominated is that I am waiting to see what else got nominated to help me whittle down what I want to nominate, and I just checked the nominations and I think that [personal profile] tielan has nominated! (Thank you!) Because the BSG foursome I was going to nominate (Lee/Kara/Sam/Dee) has been nominated, and so has the Steve/Maria/Bucky/Natasha foursome in MCU fandom, and both are foursomes I have written as sedoretus for [personal profile] tielan before. Which means that not only is there someone interested in the same characters, there's someone who's probably going to sign up who is interested in sedoretus, specifically. That is really exciting to me! And it does free up some nomination slots.

Here are some nominations I am planning:

TGE: Maia/Csethiro/Csevet/Vedero (there are a bunch of TGE ships already nominated but they are all suuuuuuuper rare)

DS9: Sisko ships, Worf/Jadzia, Miles/Keiko/Kira/Bashir

TOS: Spock/Uhura and some foursomes (although someone on the Yuletide discord may be nominating sedoretus in this fandom, which would mean I don't have to nominate them and could free up a slot)

B5: John/Delenn, John/Delenn/Lennier, Delenn/Neroon, John/Delenn/Lennier/? (I don't know who I'd put with those three to complete the sedoretu--Anna, maybe? a Minbari OC?)

Peter Wimsey, sedoretu with Parker and Mary? Or Bunter? (Although I can't think of who would be the fourth in a sedoretu with Bunter, so I may just leave that as a poly threesome.

Rivers of London--I think just Peter/Beverly here, because I can't think of any sedoretus and ever since we learned that Nightingale was ace (in the novella Masquerades of Spring) that has completely killed any desire to ship him, for me. RoL is the only one on the list that's iffy, because much as I love it I'm not sure how much I'm into RoL + marriage tropes.

That's six, and with BSG taken care of I can look at some of my other fandoms for the seventh slot. Here are some options:

SW Legends, Han/Leia/Luke/Mara, Han/Leia/Lando, Lando/Luke/Mara. Han/Leia/Lando most properly belongs in SW OT, but that would mean using a second Star Wars nomination slot.

TNG: nobody's nominated this yet, and I can't think of any sedoretus, but I would probably do something like Picard/Guinan (my TNG rare pair OTP), Picard/Ro, Riker/Ro, Troi/Worf, and Data/Geordi

Random Harvest. Look, this movie is just so tropey and melodramatic it would be amazing to pile even more tropes into it.

 


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Sinners (2025) gets its own movie review post! I watched this over the weekend in Wellington at the Empire Theatre (this was another cute one, this time in Island Bay) with one of my new NZ friends and really liked it. I have many thoughts :) Spoilers under the cut.

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This is a hard copy anthologizing/reissuing "The Warrior's Apprentice," "The Mountains of Mourning," (novella) and "The Vor Game." It turns out my family had owned a hard copy for eons but I'd never tried it, probably because it was part of a series and I wasn't sure where to start? IDK, but having read the Cordelia books I was very ready to jump back into this world!

"The Warrior's Apprentice" follows Miles after he fails the entrance exams to the Imperial military academy. Because of the poison he was exposed to in utero, he's topped out at 4'9" with very brittle bones; however, as the son of Cordelia and Aral, he's a natural military genius. He takes some time off visiting his grandmother on Beta Colony, and likes this plan because he thinks he might be able to find the place where the mother of his childhood friend/crush is buried, and impress her, after their computer hacking attempts fall short. The "seventeen-year-olds' skewed priorities" premise is fun. However, Miles quickly fails upward, and winds up accidentally acquiring a few, then several, then many, mercenaries loyal to him. This quote is actually from "Mountains of Mourning," but it sums up "Warrior's Apprentice" to a tee:
Holding two deuces and the joker. He must surely either concede or start bluffing like crazy...
(The Tumblr post about "you ever fuck up so hard you accidentally overthrow a dynasty" seems relevant here, although Miles is more concerned about keeping his emperor on the throne than deposing him.)

Bothari, who we met in the Cordelia books, is Miles' lifelong bodyguard (he carried Miles around before he learned to walk, at age four and a half). Early on, Miles realizes the horrors of war, when he orders Bothari to torture a captured pilot until he spills his secrets; Bothari removes the man's brain implants, which winds up killing him, and Miles carries that on his conscience forever afterwards. Later, we get closure of sorts to Bothari's plotline; again, I'm not entirely thrilled with the way he goes back and forth between "a character who makes bad decisions but has the potential to grow beyond them" and "Cordelia's dog." (He and Miles have a conversation about "hey if I die you'll bring my body back to bury at your mother's feet, like a dog, right? "...????" "Your father said I could. He gave me his word as Vorkosigan." Miles, speaking for the reader: "okay, when my father and I give our word as Vorkosigan that means it has to be done, that is a long-running theme of this series, but also why are we having this conversation.")

Bujold is very good at "leaving out the parts people skip." I thought the Cordelia books were a little crisper in terms of "one thing following into the next;" these novels are a little more "things happening to Miles/him failing upwards," so they don't quite rise to those heights. However, "Mountains," and "Weatherman," the novella that got turned into the opening chapters of "Vor Game," are very tautly paced!

"Mountains" sees Miles journey into the Dendarii mountains (namesake of the mercenary troop) to investigate a case of infanticide; an infant who was born with a cleft lip was found dead a few days later, and the mother suspects the father. The Barrayarans' extreme prejudice towards "mutants" means that Miles is a very prominent symbol of change, and Aral putting him on the case makes that even more prominent. (I guess it's hinted at that Barrayaran was inadvertently separated from the rest of the galaxy early in their terraforming process, so evolution went awry and everyone's inherited a fear of "mutants" ever since, but I wanted a little more about that.)

What's powerful about this is the relationship that Miles has with his late grandfather, Piotr, and the shadow he casts over the story. Piotr was very prejudiced against Miles, but Miles still burns offerings for him. This lends a stark contrast to the way the mystery plot resolves, and the fact that Miles can speak so highly of him says a lot about his own character:
"He was called the last of the Old Vor, but really, he was the first of the new. He changed with the times, from the tactics of horse cavalry to that of flyer squadrons, from swords to atomics, and he changed successfully. Our present freedom from the Cetagandan occupation is a measure of how fiercely he could adapt, then throw it all away and adapt again. At the end of his life he was called a conservative, only because so much of Barrayar had streamed past him in the direction he had led, prodded, pushed, and pointed all his life."
"Weatherman" sees Miles sent to be a weather officer on an Arctic island where infantrymen train so he can learn to work with, and under, ordinary people who don't share his intellect. Hazing ensues. So do even worse problems, and while Miles is really trying not to rock the boat (so he can get promoted to an actual spaceship), he winds up having to defy authority anyway--on behalf of people he has good reason to dislike! Bujold's afterword (in this edition anyway) has some fascinating backstory about how she came up with some of these themes.

Anyway, after that, it goes back to mercenary shenanigans, and again, I feel like this part is not quite as compelling but still very good. There's a great scene when one officer in the mostly-male Dendarii complains about how someone else betrayed them and took over, and a woman officer politely points out "actually, if the rest of you had paid attention to how he treats me, maybe you could have assessed his character earlier." Their different reads of the situation say a lot about how sexism can inadvertently take hold in institutions, without being too heavy-handed about it. Another very funny and too real situation: the bigwigs are like "our security systems are classified and airgapped, how could anyone have exfiltrated data?" "Well, it just takes one person who's looking up information on the classified network and also willing to talk to someone outside via the unclassified network." "Are you saying we have to be on guard against insider threats, too?!?" Being a spy is hard :(

A few more highlights:
"I wish I'd known more about this [his unusual prenatal situation] as a kid, I could have agitated for two birthdays, one when Mother had the cesarian, and one when they finally popped me out of the replicator."

"If he gets extradited home, the penalty's quartering. Technically."
"That doesn't sound so bad." Hathaway shrugged. "He's been quartered in my recycling center for two months. It could hardly be worse. What's the problem?"
"Quartering," said Miles. "Uh--not domiciled. Cut in four pieces."
Hathaway stared, shocked. "But that would kill him!" He looked around, and wilted under the triple, unified, and exasperated glares of the three Barrayarans.
"Betans," said Baz disgustedly. "I can't stand Betans."

The boys, once the facts penetrated their sleepiness, thought it was all just great, and wanted to return to the tent and lie in wait for the next assassin. Ma Karal, shrill and firm, herded them indoors instead and made them bed down in the main room. It was an hour before they stopped complaining at the injustice of it and went back to sleep.

"I saw casualties in Vordarian's Pretendership before you were born--"
I was a casualty in Vordarian's Pretendership before I was born, thought Miles, his irritation growing wilder.

 
This is way too real, please tell me there is fanfiction of it:
Miles knew about criminal orders, every academy man did. His father came down personally and gave a one-day seminar on the topic to the seniors at midyear. He'd made it a requirement to graduate, by Imperial fiat back when he'd been Regent. What exactly constituted a criminal order, when and how to disobey it. With vid evidence from various historical test cases and bad examples, including the politically disastrous Solstice Massacre, that had taken place under the admiral's own command. Invariably one or more cadents had to leave the room to throw up during that part.
The other instructors hated Vorkosigan's Day. Their classes were subtly disrupted for weeks afterward. One reason Admiral Vorkosigan didn't wait till any later in the year; he almost always had to make a return trip a few weeks after, to talk some disturbed cadet out of dropping out at almost the finale of his schooling.

One question: Cordelia is in-universe famous, at least on Beta Colony, their version of history credits her with killing Vorrutyer (which she didn't do) and singlehandedly changing the tide of the war (which she did). Miles travels under the name "Mr. Naismith" as his mercenary identity, and this somehow doesn't raise any questions. I assume the intended in-universe explanation is "she's not actually that famous beyond Beta," but I can think of several other theories:
  • "Naismith" is like the "Smith" of Beta, "Mr. Naismith" is everyone's "John Doe" name
  • "Naismith" is a rare name, but it's everyone's "George Washington" name because of Cordelia, everyone realizes it's an alias but it's the obvious alias an idealistic Betan would pick
  • everyone assumes he named himself after this Naismith for the irony because he's so small!
The cover art is a double-sided Jack (the playing card) with one view of Ensign Vorkosigan and the other direction as Mr. Naismith. I can't tell if his facial features are supposed to be distorted/strangely proportioned because of his disabilities? At the risk of being a prejudiced Barrayaran I must admit he doesn't look very attractive to me :/ but I'll try to keep an open mind, appearance isn't everything!

Bingo: "Warrior's Apprentice" and "Mountains of Mourning" were originally published in the 80s; the former was also a previous readalong.

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